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The difference between japan and china
I was born in japan. When i was 4 months old, I came to china with my family. I had lived in china for 14 years, and i know the culture and custom of china quiet well. Different from Japanese students, Chinese students care about fashion a lot. They don’t even know what they need. They just cost a lot of money in fashion things. It’s tragic. On the other hand, Japanese students don’t pursue fashion a lot. They just talk about stars and movies. Sometimes they go to the Karaoke with friends. And i also want to talk about school. In Chinese school, we have to do so much homework. And what’s more, we have to care about our cloths, our shoes and so on everyday. I feel very tired. But in japan, we needn’t do such things. I feel relax here. In addition, i have more spare time to do the things that i really like to do.
In brief, in a world, the culture and custom of china is quiet different from japan’s. I really love this country!
求鉴定是否有错或纰漏,或有语句不通的地方。求教!


1楼2012-07-20 20:06回复
    人工置顶!


    2楼2012-07-20 20:07
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      人工置顶


      4楼2012-07-20 20:51
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        人工置顶


        5楼2012-07-21 13:46
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          对了各位,昨天有人帮我改过这篇文章,求大家继续鉴定
          I was born in Japan. When I was 4 months old, I came to China with my family. I lived in China
          for 14 years, and I know the cultures and custom of China quite well. Unlike Japanese
          students, Chinese students care a lot about fashion. They don’t even know what
          they need. They just spend a lot of money on fashion things. It’s tragic. on the contrary, Japanese students don’t pursue fashion a lot. They just talk
          about stars and movies. Sometimes they go to the Karaoke with friends.
          And I
          also want to talk about school. In a Chinese school, we have to do a lot of homework.
          And what’s more, we have to pay attention to our clothes, our shoes and so on. All
          that makes me very tired. But in Japan, we needn’t do such things. I
          feel relaxed here. In addition, I have more spare time to do the things that I
          really like to do.
          In summary, then, the cultures and custom of China are quite different from that of Japan.
          I really love this country!


          10楼2012-07-21 15:24
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