要不要旁白？？？

我看一个人当旁白，一个人当Captain，一个人当Gork，一个人又当Lam又当Peters。

倪仁杰明天来的了嘛？明天可以再在学校里讨论一下.

SD

续写
Captain King was escape from Gork’s cave to freedom ,The laser bean made Gork’s eye got better. He went to the police to report what happened. The policeman tell him Captain and his crew were escaped from the cave in the kangaroos’ pockets. So, Gork went to the planet captain king live in -----The Earth. After his spaceship landed on the Earth he used GPS found where does captain live in and went to captain king’s house. Suddenly he saw a red car running fast. Inside the car is captain king! Gork ran into his spaceship and drive his spaceship flew after captain king’s car. Captain king drove his car into a tunnel. Gork’s spaceship could not flew in it. So Gork landed his spaceship near the tunnel. But Gork is too big and high to went into the tunnel. He was very angry and roared :’ Nobody! I will get! I will kill you!” Moments later many soldiers arrived. They aim their guns at Gork . Gork quickly ran into his spaceship and flew away. Gork roared in his spaceship :’I will be back!’ Captain king run out of the tunnel and shouted back:’ I will wait for you Gork!’ Then Gork’s spaceship disappeared in the sky. The world peace was restored.

倪仁杰SD！