【薇薇】希望英语好的帮我看看这篇作文。就算是送给V的生日礼物了~

这是我写的英语作文。。。水平不好但还是希望大家帮忙修改。这样明天也许有可能被当作范文然后大家就都知道AVRIL了！(无视大小写)
MY CD REVIEW
MY FAVORITE CD IS CALLED”GOODBYE LULLABY”. THE MUSICIAN OF THE CD IS AVRIL LAVIGNE.ALMOST ALL THE SONGS ARE MADE BY HERSELF. THE MUSIC DOESN`T SOUND NOISY BUT TOUCHING. THEY ARE GREAT SONGS WHICH HAVE BEAUTIFUL LYRICS AND MICE MELODIES. THE SINGER ADDED HER OWN IDEAS INTO THOSE SONGS SO I CRIED OVER AND OVER AGAIN BECAUSE OF THE STORIES WHICH ARE WRITTEN INTO THOSE SONGS.BUT HER COMPANY GAVE HER TOO LITTLE MONEY SO THAT SHE COULDN`T MAKE THE CD VERY WELL.THOSE SONGS REMIND ME OF A GIRL WHO IS GROWING UP SLOWLY.I REALLY LOVE IT!

请问你几年级？

额，鲨鱼兄
我晓得把这么一篇作文拿到吧里来很丢脸很丢脸
可是弱弱的作文有老师要求的句式、格式。不能改
况且我才刚初三。。。
我已经很有勇气了。。。

初三丢什么人如果高三才有那么点丢人

额。小菊花是在讽刺么~。~

乖乖；全部大写看的好纠结

我英语水平有限..

还勉强凑和，我也初三的哦

一般专辑不叫CD，CD只是载体，改成Album
THE SINGER ADDED HER OWN IDEAS INTO THOSE SONGS，(这里加个逗号比用so好些) I CRIED OVER AND OVER AGAIN BECAUSE OF THE STORIES WHICH ARE WRITTEN INTO THOSE SONGS.BUT HER COMPANY not give her enough money, SO THAT SHE COULDN`T MAKE VERY WELL(那你的意思就是这专辑没做好？改下吧：P ).THOSE SONGS REMIND ME OF A GIRL WHO IS GROWING UP. I REALLY LOVE IT!