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Since the first 主题(或者跟主题相关的名次,比如说教育你就写SCHOOL) have been introduced to human beings live, the fierce controversy about 主题 have not been stopped. Some claimers argue that 第一方观点. The others, yet, consider opposite. Based on my own experience and analysis, I appreciate the former/latter one. for the following pivots
To start with, 分论点1. For example,例子(以下仅用于你没有例子可说)according to a recent survey taken in my own university. 83% students agree that 换一种说法的观点。
   Last, but not the least, 分论点2. 细节或者举例,举例同上,如果是负面论点可以考虑排比,见下。Can you imagine that one day ____________; Can you imagine that one day ___________; Can you imagine that one day__________.
   Based on the hinges above, I strongly argues that 主观点。Further more, I really suggesttaht 自己的建议,注意是虚拟语气(should +do).
cherish sth,xxx is superior
珍视 important
sth is important=sth is superior to sth
it is adj for sb to do
it is XXX that xxxxxxx
Only XX CAN/DO XXXXXXX
A sudent am I    =    A student as I am
Based on xxx,xxxxx
Interested in XXXX
So tired as he ,So fast does she run,So fast does she run,So tired is he
最后就是几个国外的语言习惯 第一,重点尽量放前头 XXXXX,for(because 比较符合语言习惯 除非为了防止句式单一,不然就不要把原因状语放句首了



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