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呱呱呱 曲项向天歌惹

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像这样写就是win吗?
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The magnificent and beneficent transformations, which have been enacted over the past decade or two and, as well, continue unfolding, are as always prosecuting the metamorphosis of China into a land of promise—with prosperousness, hopefulness and vigorousness burgeoning—wherein her people engage of their own accord, should I comment straightforwardly and without prejudice, in exerting concerted efforts to the crescent development and, be it ridden with toil or as unexacting as any, the devotion to establishing a progressively harmonious and amicable society.
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当然不是,需要莎士比亚才行
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错误的,Shakespeare也不行
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请“神”叶芝,莎士比亚,李白,塞万提斯也许能救你命。
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孩子,祝你们好运。


IP属地:四川来自iPhone客户端1楼2024-11-15 03:19回复
    文法地道,但选词故弄玄虚。但是如果选词也精简呢?能win吗?不能,


    IP属地:四川来自iPhone客户端2楼2024-11-15 03:28
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      IP属地:江苏来自iPhone客户端3楼2024-11-19 19:52
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        马上10级惹 9经验


        IP属地:四川来自iPhone客户端4楼2024-11-21 22:26
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