错误不少,and是连词,连接两个句子构成复合句的 she very smart 这句话少谓语动词 so many of her things 应该是so many things of her(也有点不恰当感觉) summer vocation应该没毛病 但是后一句时态有问题吧,应该用将来时? 形容人有的,习惯用have吧,感觉there are不合适吧 还有because引导状语从句,不是连词,是引导词,所以不能独立成句,要有主句从句的 我自己也半斤八两,以上提供参考,以语法书为准
and she is very smart At the same time She likes reading, traveling She has many achievements, such as the first prize in the teaching competition because she works very hard