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这篇文章里有什么语法错误吗?或者说哪里有写的不好的地方?


IP属地:内蒙古来自Android客户端1楼2023-01-13 19:42回复
    有没有人啊


    IP属地:内蒙古来自Android客户端2楼2023-01-13 20:20
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      错误不少,and是连词,连接两个句子构成复合句的
      she very smart 这句话少谓语动词
      so many of her things 应该是so many things of her(也有点不恰当感觉)
      summer vocation应该没毛病
      但是后一句时态有问题吧,应该用将来时?
      形容人有的,习惯用have吧,感觉there are不合适吧
      还有because引导状语从句,不是连词,是引导词,所以不能独立成句,要有主句从句的
      我自己也半斤八两,以上提供参考,以语法书为准


      IP属地:辽宁来自Android客户端3楼2023-01-14 10:46
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        这字太难认


        IP属地:辽宁来自iPhone客户端4楼2023-01-14 11:42
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          and she is very smart
          At the same time
          She likes reading, traveling
          She has many achievements, such as the first prize in the teaching competition because she works very hard


          IP属地:山西来自Android客户端5楼2023-01-14 11:47
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