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我写了一篇文章,用百度翻译的,肯定有错误,来帮我挑错吧。
Recently, another life has left this world, is a singer, her singing accompanies our young time. She had depression when she was alive, a painful disease, not a physical pain, but a spiritual one. This kind of disease can make people become negative, do not have the interest to do anything, the patient won't have self-confidence, because she feels everybody is criticizing her. Curing the disease requires not only the medicine prescribed by the doctor, but also the need for love. Our love is more from parents. Because parents love is the most worthy of trust. But when our parents can't give us love, then we have to love ourselves. We can think of myself as a child, the child may suffer from older brother or other relatives ridiculed, they may say "you stupid like a pig" or "you're just a child, what do you do not do well". So we really think we're stupid and can't do anything well. But now that we grow up, we have the ability to love this child. We give this child praise and love. In order to stimulate the child's infinite potential. We should learn to love ourselves, because this is the premise of loving others.


来自iPhone客户端1楼2016-12-28 11:51回复
    顶一下


    来自iPhone客户端2楼2016-12-28 12:03
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      重写吧,改错改不完的


      IP属地:甘肃来自iPhone客户端3楼2016-12-28 12:05
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        顶一下,谁来帮我修改啊


        来自iPhone客户端4楼2016-12-28 13:10
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          不知道你中文是啥。咋改?


          IP属地:浙江来自Android客户端5楼2016-12-28 13:11
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            最近,又有一个生命离开了这个世界,是个歌手,她的歌声陪伴了我们的少年时光。在她活着的时候得了抑郁症,这是一种很让人痛苦的疾病,不是身体的疼痛,而是心灵上的。这种病会让人变的消极,没有兴趣去做任何事情,病人会没有自信,因为她感觉所有人都在批评她。治愈这种疾病不仅需要靠医生开的药物,而且需要爱。我们的爱更多的是来自父母。因为父母的爱是最值得相信的。可是当我们的父母给不了我们爱的时候呢,这时,我们就要自己爱自己。我们可以把自己当成一个孩子,也许这个孩子从小遭受过来自于年长的哥哥或者是其他亲戚的嘲笑,他们可能会说“你像一头猪一样笨”或者“你只是个孩子,你什么事也做不好”。于是,我们真的认为我们很笨,什么事也做不好。不过,现在我们长大了,我们有能力去爱这个孩子。我们应该给予这个孩子赞美和爱。这样才能激发出这个孩子的无限潜能。我们应该学会爱自己,因为这是爱别人的前提。


            来自iPhone客户端6楼2016-12-28 13:12
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              好多


              来自Android客户端7楼2016-12-28 13:28
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                一个放弃了家人或被家人放弃的人


                来自iPhone客户端8楼2016-12-28 13:56
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