这是拜伦的《雅典的女郎》。
拜伦风流倜傥，比起志摩的情深意重，他更是个潇洒的情种。他的一生邂逅过很多眉目盼兮的风情女子，而他也将青春与热血，豪情与理想挥洒在希腊这古老的土地上。

我将其译为诗经体

你是很6啊

诗歌都看的不多。不过我也喜欢济慈
很有创意

好厉害

厉害

还有一首译作是济慈的《明亮的星》，也是诗经体，我打算抽空正儿八经地用文字打上来。

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原诗如下——
明亮的星！我祈求像你那样坚定——
Bright star, would I were steadfast as thou art---
但我不愿意高悬夜空，独自辉映，
Not in lone splendour hung aloft the night
并且永恒地睁着眼睛，
And watching, with eternal lids apart,
像自然间耐心的、不眠的隐士，
Like nature's patient, sleepless Eremite,
不断望着海滔，那大地的神父，
The moving waters at their priestlike task
用圣水冲洗人所卜居的岸沿，
Of pure ablution round earth's human shores,
或者注视飘飞的白雪，象面幕，
Or gazing on the new soft-fallen mask
灿烂、轻盈，覆盖着洼地和高山——
Of snow upon the mountains and the moors---
呵，不，——我只愿坚定不移地
No---yet still stedfast, still unchangeable,
以头枕在爱人酥软的胸脯上，
Pillowed upon my fair love's ripening breast,
永远感到它舒缓地降落、升起；
To feel for ever its soft swell and fall,
而醒来，心里充满甜蜜的激荡，
Awake for ever in a sweet unrest,
不断，不断听着她细腻的呼吸，
Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,
就这样活着，——或昏迷地死去。
And so live ever---or else swoon to death

【自译】陆游《钗头凤.红酥手》
Phoenix Hairpin.Rosy and Soft Hand
Yellow-vined wine,
With your rosy and soft hand;
Spring permeates the whole town,
Around the court willows stand.
Joy fades for east winds blow.
Years'departure with a cup of sorrow,
No!No!No!
Still is the spring as ever,
With my figure empty and withered
As well the handkerchief dipped with blood and tear.
Peach blossoms have fallen
While the garden silently lies.
Still is the oath yet the letter is not delivered.
Never！Never！Never！
红酥手，黄縢酒，满城春色宫墙柳。东风恶，欢情薄。一怀愁绪，几年离索。错、错、错！
春如旧，人空瘦，泪痕红浥鲛绡透。桃花落，闲池阁。山盟虽在，锦书难托。莫、莫、莫！

【自译】唐琬《钗头凤.世情薄》
Phoenix Hairpin.Love is Dead
Love is dead as it comes discourteous,
Rain sents the dusk as flowers fall ever.
Wind blows and dried are my tears,
Shall I tell my heart in letters,
Leaning as whispering against the hence.
Arduous!Arduous!Arduous!
Yesterday no once more as we parted,
Falling as swings always do me light.
Horn fades for ending is the night.
For fear of a doubt
Holding back my tears below joy as pretended.
Hide!Hide!Hide!
世情薄，人情恶，雨送黄昏花易落。晓风干，泪痕残。欲笺心事，独语斜阑。难，难，难！
人成各，今非昨，病魂常似秋千索。角声寒，夜阑珊。怕人寻问，咽泪装欢。瞒，瞒，瞒！

这个标题我似乎应该改改了

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