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来自Android客户端1楼2016-02-03 22:24回复
    (认为可提高的都已经用波浪线标出)
    The Legend of Steve:Big adventure of gameworld
    Chapter Zero:Character Introduce
    Every character who appear in the novel will be introduce in this paragraph.
    Steve(main character):
    Original Shape:@在灾变后
    Ending:Infinity halo of main character!
    Match:Ann (wife)
    Disposition:He is going a kind chivalry way because of the experience of doctors,with the principle of kindness beyond everything,meet a lot of good friends who cherish the same ideals and follow the same path.Although sometimes will be a little extreme or stubborn,and he won’t change his mind easily,yet his deep-disposition is careful and kind to his friends.
    Ann:
    Original Shape:@灾难论 -the elder sister of @在灾变后
    Ending:Won’t die.
    Match:Steve
    Disposition:If you aren’t her friend,you must feel her character introverted,but as a matter of fact,she trust her friends like a flame.Daring to adventure,daring to strive;but not stubborn like her brother Steve.She often thinking and she also has a great perceptual knowledge as a woman,the personality complementer of Steve.
    HIM-寒暄:略,原因有二:1.水平不够 2.请自学高一英语的新初二同学来译。
    Nether White:
    Original Shape:None(just fill with the normal monster list.)
    Ending:Left the gameworld with HIM together.Although she doesn’t belongs to the real world.
    Match:HIM
    Disposition:Kind,but黑化when mankind killed all of her family,then 投靠to HIM.
    End Black:
    Original Shape:@无聊啊靠9 -one of the classmate of @在灾变后
    Ending:被兔兔拖出了游戏世界来到了现实。
    Match:兔兔(but it is an heart-hidden and unrequited love)
    Disposition:产生了懵懂的情愫when 兔兔把他就出 from the citizen of AoShuang Town.为人正直,厌恶杀戮,但更加厌恶那些迫害折磨他的人类。He won’t like any human forever,except 兔兔.
    兔兔:略,名字可据自称“激萌小兔兔”或外貌“性感兔女郎”造名。
    鼠酱:略,反正不是NezumiSAMA,建议写作moe-mouse/moemouse
    邪仙:略,水平有限。
    PS:本文目前出现的结局都是属于第一部游戏世界的。
    Chapter One:Prologue
    “Are you ready?Steve?You Will lost all of your memory about real lift after you enter the system,which could change your mind so that you can be adapt to it.The system will virtual a reality like ours.And you


    来自Android客户端2楼2016-02-03 22:24
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      额,被砍了,继续还是看原帖吧!


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