第一段

1 a strengthen willing is a great importance to succeed

不错不错

字太乱，看的我烦，最后一断错，最后一句错，前面有时态错，看不仔细，字实在。。。。succeed还是suueed，有些不能连写，比如cl连着变成d

grammar mistakes:
don't add "the" before people
can accomplish great missions
the students "do" also
the strong will does a lot of
they won't "become"
you "need" to (last paragraph)
不太明白这:
the suceed can't without the strong will??

saying always easily than doing things such as quit smoking which seems to be easy but hardly to be implemented.so nothing will be succeed unless having a strong will.there are several solutions to this:1st it is a promise to do something to make an achieviement. 2nd the one will be given a different duty by having a strong will. 3rd students must study harder to have a bright future

字

我觉得还是打出来好点

Lz只上照不打字,没诚意

楼楼字好漂亮

my god 这些人用英文评论真棒，就是有的看不懂

其实我想问下，听力的时候我们应该去尽力听人家表达了什么意思呢，还是尽力去发现是否出现了选项的词？

四级多少分?