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老妈叫我写英文作文练习,所以就来点随笔吧。囧

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When I look back to the past 3 years, I can't even remember who I used to be. All the memories, like lryrics in one of my favorite songs says, "whether good or not, all have been crumpled and thrown away". To a certain extent, I have become a person I hated. It doesn't mean I am mean inside my heart. In fact, I never think of hurting someone else, nor even making anyone sad. In the past, I was so well protected that I never needed to be defensive agaisnt anyone. But now when it comes to be on myself, I feel so powerless to face everything alone. I ought to be congageous, or turn to someone for help. However, I closed myself up, shrinking like a hedgehog, hurting everyone who tries to approach me.
暂时就到这里了,后面没想到怎么写。


1楼2014-01-20 19:39回复
    初中水平?


    IP属地:广东2楼2014-01-20 19:46
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      Apparently hedgehogs don't hurt :")


      来自iPhone客户端3楼2014-01-20 19:47
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        Well written, but too melancholy for one in such a young age


        IP属地:北京来自iPhone客户端4楼2014-01-20 19:51
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          长懒看,level low


          IP属地:安徽来自手机贴吧5楼2014-01-20 19:51
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            楼主真厉害
            ◆◇ 回忆不停拉扯
              扯出黑白交替的颜色 


            来自Android客户端6楼2014-01-20 19:58
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              高中水平好吧。


              IP属地:四川来自iPhone客户端7楼2014-01-20 20:01
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