记得今年初给大家翻译过Black Burning heart,今年重温,又有不同的感觉,我决定再次翻译,这次尽量按照原文
歌词传递一种愤恨的情绪
Black Burning Heart 我心已焚
I wish that I could be
我的殷切之愿:
In the cellars of the sea
在深海地窖里,
And disappear in them
渐渐逝去我的身影
Never to be seen again
从此销声匿迹,再无音讯
Leave this life
转身离开
It’s unrelenting appetite
生活残酷的食欲
For feeding off the weak
从来以弱者为食
Who never had their turn to speak
受伤的永远是那些姑且生活,而永远轮不到自己发言的人
The sky will be my shroud
就让天空作我尸衣
A monument of cloud
云是坟头的墓碑
If we could turn back
如果能有机会,我们可以重新来过
You can paper over the crack
多少裂痕,遗憾都可以瞬间弥补
But it will return now
但当梦境灰飞烟灭
And your heart will burn black
你的心焚烧殆尽
Give me your hand
请给我——你的手
Cut the skin, let me in
剥下我的皮囊,让我踏入前方
The molecules of us
Bleeding into one again
构成我们身体的所有,看着它们浑然散去,又再次血流成一体
The sky will be my shroud
天空是我的尸衣
A cenotaph of cloud
云是坟头的墓碑
If we could turn back
You can paper over the crack
But it will return now
And your heart will burn black
Forgotten my way home
回家的路,我已忘记
Forgotten everything that I know
脑中充斥的一切,已全部消散
Every day a false start
每天错误的开始
And it burns my heart
就这样,焚尽我心
I know everything you said was right and I suppose
我懂得,所有你说都正确无疑,我想
Everything is here forever till it goes
世事完美安好,只要它们不自甘堕落,以至于毁掉了自己
You gave it all away, kept nothing for yourself
Just a picture on the shelf
你倾尽所有,甚至一无所有,可是,得不偿失,一切尽为往事
Je souhaiterai m'immerger dans les profondeurs des mers
Y dispara?tre pour ne plus jamais être vu
(就是歌曲第一句)
Burning up
Now I'm racing down a road I don't recognise
沿着这条路奔跑,没有方向
I realise I've forgotten my way home
Forgotten everything that I know
我渐渐开始明白,我已经抛开了一切,虽然孑然一身
Every day a false start
And it burns my heart
Turn back
每天错误的开始,燃尽我心
不知这首歌会不会戳中你们的泪点。
其中最著名的一句应该是:Everything is here forever till it goes
很多keane的歌都不好翻,尤其是 Won't be broken ,连那首歌歌词都非常难以理解透彻
而下次应该翻译什么呢?
歌词传递一种愤恨的情绪
Black Burning Heart 我心已焚
I wish that I could be
我的殷切之愿:
In the cellars of the sea
在深海地窖里,
And disappear in them
渐渐逝去我的身影
Never to be seen again
从此销声匿迹,再无音讯
Leave this life
转身离开
It’s unrelenting appetite
生活残酷的食欲
For feeding off the weak
从来以弱者为食
Who never had their turn to speak
受伤的永远是那些姑且生活,而永远轮不到自己发言的人
The sky will be my shroud
就让天空作我尸衣
A monument of cloud
云是坟头的墓碑
If we could turn back
如果能有机会,我们可以重新来过
You can paper over the crack
多少裂痕,遗憾都可以瞬间弥补
But it will return now
但当梦境灰飞烟灭
And your heart will burn black
你的心焚烧殆尽
Give me your hand
请给我——你的手
Cut the skin, let me in
剥下我的皮囊,让我踏入前方
The molecules of us
Bleeding into one again
构成我们身体的所有,看着它们浑然散去,又再次血流成一体
The sky will be my shroud
天空是我的尸衣
A cenotaph of cloud
云是坟头的墓碑
If we could turn back
You can paper over the crack
But it will return now
And your heart will burn black
Forgotten my way home
回家的路,我已忘记
Forgotten everything that I know
脑中充斥的一切,已全部消散
Every day a false start
每天错误的开始
And it burns my heart
就这样,焚尽我心
I know everything you said was right and I suppose
我懂得,所有你说都正确无疑,我想
Everything is here forever till it goes
世事完美安好,只要它们不自甘堕落,以至于毁掉了自己
You gave it all away, kept nothing for yourself
Just a picture on the shelf
你倾尽所有,甚至一无所有,可是,得不偿失,一切尽为往事
Je souhaiterai m'immerger dans les profondeurs des mers
Y dispara?tre pour ne plus jamais être vu
(就是歌曲第一句)
Burning up
Now I'm racing down a road I don't recognise
沿着这条路奔跑,没有方向
I realise I've forgotten my way home
Forgotten everything that I know
我渐渐开始明白,我已经抛开了一切,虽然孑然一身
Every day a false start
And it burns my heart
Turn back
每天错误的开始,燃尽我心
不知这首歌会不会戳中你们的泪点。
其中最著名的一句应该是:Everything is here forever till it goes
很多keane的歌都不好翻,尤其是 Won't be broken ,连那首歌歌词都非常难以理解透彻
而下次应该翻译什么呢?