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【MARCIA】Chapter 2

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1楼2013-05-18 19:58回复
    □□At arond ten am,we got into the car.


    2楼2013-05-18 20:00
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      □□Most students fell into sleep.The car became quiet .I stored some cakes before I went into the car but I had already eaten them.Then I closed my eyes.


      3楼2013-05-18 20:05
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        □□When I got up,there wasn't anyone in the car.I went out and saw Eve sitting by the sea water.


        4楼2013-05-18 20:07
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          □□"What are you doing Eve?"I asked.
          □□"I'm collecting shells."She said.
          □□Then we didn't say anything.
          □□Eve was my best friends before,but she had been unfriendly to me since that accident.


          5楼2013-05-18 20:11
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            □□"Go away."She said angrily and made me come back to earth.


            7楼2013-05-18 20:16
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              □□The next morning,Erin took us to a high house.
              □□"Did you bring your glass envelopes?"Erin asked.
              □□I standed beside Eve and asked,"What did you write on the paper?"
              □□Eve shouted at me,"Don't talk to me anymore!"
              □□Suddenly,the big light on the platfond(天花板) fell down.
              □□"Topple over(趴下),Harry!"Emilio shouted to me.At that timt I didn't know what had happened.He hit me and the big light fell to his and Eve's bodies.I loocked at Emilio,his head had already left his body.Eve's legs were rotted and her left eyes got injured.Other students all ran away.


              8楼2013-05-18 20:22
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                □□Suddenly,Eve shouted to me,"Hurry up,kill me, Harry!"
                □□I didn;t know what she said."Why?Don't say that!How can I kill you?"
                □□"I'm a dangorous character,please!"
                □□"No,never,I didn't believe!You are my besr friend,I can't kill you!"
                □□Eve shouted again,"If I don't die,other people will die!"
                □□I beacame shock when I heard that.Is Jack a real person?But why don't other people remeber him?Ifelt cold.It's impossible.Jack's death...Because of Eve?


                9楼2013-05-18 20:28
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                  Please wait for the next chapter!
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                  10楼2013-05-18 20:29
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                    这篇文章整篇都是用过去时态写的,你认为是现在完成时的句子当然要往前移成过去完成时。@泠泪碎瑛


                    来自手机贴吧11楼2013-05-23 20:29
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