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1.Struggle For Life 生命之挣
Only darkness
只剩下黑暗
I can fell the beat of my heart getting weaker
我感知到我的心跳渐渐微弱
A tightness that makes it hard for me to move my body
窒息让我无法移动分毫
I'm tired
我疲倦至极
I can feel the wind through my hair,the beating of his wings
我能感受到风从我的发间滑过,和他振翅的声音
All around it's dark
黑暗包围着
But I can see a light far from the distance
但我看到了远处的微光
You can't die now
你现在不能死去
Find your strength Daltor
去寻找你的力量,Daltor
Only darkness
只剩下黑暗
I can fell the beat of my heart getting weaker
我感知到我的心跳渐渐微弱
A tightness that makes it hard for me to move my body
窒息让我无法移动分毫
I'm tired
我疲倦至极
I can feel the wind through my hair,the beating of his wings
我能感受到风从我的发间滑过,和他振翅的声音
All around it's dark
黑暗包围着
But I can see a light far from the distance
但我看到了远处的微光
You can't die now
你现在不能死去
Find your strength Daltor
去寻找你的力量,Daltor
2.To the master of darkness 向黑暗之主
「Storyteller」叙事者
A dazzing sky rips the sky
一道耀眼的光芒撕裂天空
Drawing lines through the dusk
将暮色划开
Nobody sees it
没有人看到
The heroes keep walking on
英雄们不曾停止前进
Cruelly the sunlight is hitting his armour
强烈的阳光照耀着他的盔甲
That's reflecting rays all arounds
在四周恣意反射
Wonderful creature
完美的造物
With instinct to kill
杀戮的本性
With his magic Sendor has stolen
有魔力的Sendor被窃取
Your will might and strong
你会变得强大
Oh,so quickly you zoom
你如此迅速的起飞上升
Showing Daltor his door
给Daltor指引他的出路
Wonderful creature
完美的造物
With nothing to fear
无所畏惧
You fly over valleys so fierce and austere
你艰难却毫不退缩的飞跃山谷
Holding and clutching the knight in your claws
骑士被你置于爪心
「Black Dragon」黑龙
Give up！You foolish madman
放弃吧！你这个愚蠢的疯子
Give up！You cannot win
收手吧！你没有胜算
Start saying your last prayers
开始你的临终遗言
Cause your life won't be spared
你的事迹最终无人知晓
「Storyteller」叙事者
A dazzing sky rips the sky
一道耀眼的光芒撕裂天空
Drawing lines through the dusk
将暮色划开
Nobody sees it
没有人看到
The heroes keep walking on
英雄们不曾停止前进
Cruelly the sunlight is hitting his armour
强烈的阳光照耀着他的盔甲
That's reflecting rays all arounds
在四周恣意反射
Wonderful creature
完美的造物
With instinct to kill
杀戮的本性
With his magic Sendor has stolen
有魔力的Sendor被窃取
Your will might and strong
你会变得强大
Oh,so quickly you zoom
你如此迅速的起飞上升
Showing Daltor his door
给Daltor指引他的出路
Wonderful creature
完美的造物
With nothing to fear
无所畏惧
You fly over valleys so fierce and austere
你艰难却毫不退缩的飞跃山谷
Holding and clutching the knight in your claws
骑士被你置于爪心
「Black Dragon」黑龙
Give up！You foolish madman
放弃吧！你这个愚蠢的疯子
Give up！You cannot win
收手吧！你没有胜算
Start saying your last prayers
开始你的临终遗言
Cause your life won't be spared
你的事迹最终无人知晓
「Daltor」
My spirit's pure my faith is strong
我坚定的信仰被纯净的心灵净化
Though I ain't got my silver sword
尽管我还没有得到那把银色之剑
I will save myself and you
我会将救赎赐与你我
「Storyteller」叙事者
Wounded,bleeding from his chest and possessed
伤口，他的胸口流血不止
The beast fights the king of the west
猛兽与西方之王的斗争
Casting shadows on the land
把阴影抛向大地
Leaving traces on the white sand
在白色沙滩上留下踪迹
「Daltor」
Now listen,hear my voice
现在，听着
I know your heart is still in here
我知道你的心一直在这
Refuse his guidance
违抗他的指引
I know you can
我知道你可以
My spirit's pure my faith is strong
我坚定的信仰被纯净的心灵净化
Though I ain't got my silver sword
尽管我还没有得到那把银色之剑
I will save myself and you
我会将救赎赐与你我
「Storyteller」叙事者
Wounded,bleeding from his chest and possessed
伤口，他的胸口流血不止
The beast fights the king of the west
猛兽与西方之王的斗争
Casting shadows on the land
把阴影抛向大地
Leaving traces on the white sand
在白色沙滩上留下踪迹
「Daltor」
Now listen,hear my voice
现在，听着
I know your heart is still in here
我知道你的心一直在这
Refuse his guidance
违抗他的指引
I know you can
我知道你可以
今天的翻译，无境之门
3.Gates of Noland
无境之门
[Storyteller]
叙事者
Meanwhile the heroes are searching for a way
英雄们正在寻找前进方向的
To get to the Dark Cave as soon as they can
尽可能快的到达那黑色洞穴
they're ready for anything to stop the impending war
他们做好了一切准备去阻止即将发生的战争
this is what they gathered for
这就是他们一直想要达到的
they stick to each other and they promise to themselve
他们相互紧靠，他们相互许诺
they won't let fear or vengeance take control over their lives
他们不会让恐惧的仇恨控制他们的生活
now that Dorus has the sword
Dorus握着长剑
they're feeling strong again
他们再一次聚起力量
feeling finally as a whole
就像最后联合在了一起
even tighter than before
相互靠得更近
Step by step they walk in line
一步一步向前走去
Alron's leading the way to the inaccessible gates of Noland
Alron指引着通向无境的路
[The Group]
Waving our banners with pride we go
我们前进，挥舞着骄傲的旗帜
from the mountain tops to the shores with our heads up high
从山顶到海岸边，我们始终高昂头颅
to the moon so bright
月光皎洁
we deliver our song tonight
我们相互传唱着勇气之歌
[Storyteller]
叙事者
The end of Lastworld is near and they feel
他们感觉到了终结之地
that peril and anguish are waiting for them
危险和痛苦夹道欢迎
Now that Dorus has the sword the wizard will succumb
Dorus手执长剑，巫师甘愿臣服
and then peace will shine again
和平之光再次闪耀
even brighter than before
比以往更加耀眼
Step by step they walk in line
一步一步向前走去
Alron's leading the way to the inaccessible gates of Noland
Alron指引着通向无境的路
[The Group]
Waving our banners with pride we go
我们前进，挥舞着骄傲的旗帜
from the mountain tops to the shores with our heads up high
从山顶到海边，我们始终高昂头颅
to the moon so bright
月光皎洁
we deliver our song tonight
我们相互传唱着勇气之歌
3.Gates of Noland
无境之门
[Storyteller]
叙事者
Meanwhile the heroes are searching for a way
英雄们正在寻找前进方向的
To get to the Dark Cave as soon as they can
尽可能快的到达那黑色洞穴
they're ready for anything to stop the impending war
他们做好了一切准备去阻止即将发生的战争
this is what they gathered for
这就是他们一直想要达到的
they stick to each other and they promise to themselve
他们相互紧靠，他们相互许诺
they won't let fear or vengeance take control over their lives
他们不会让恐惧的仇恨控制他们的生活
now that Dorus has the sword
Dorus握着长剑
they're feeling strong again
他们再一次聚起力量
feeling finally as a whole
就像最后联合在了一起
even tighter than before
相互靠得更近
Step by step they walk in line
一步一步向前走去
Alron's leading the way to the inaccessible gates of Noland
Alron指引着通向无境的路
[The Group]
Waving our banners with pride we go
我们前进，挥舞着骄傲的旗帜
from the mountain tops to the shores with our heads up high
从山顶到海岸边，我们始终高昂头颅
to the moon so bright
月光皎洁
we deliver our song tonight
我们相互传唱着勇气之歌
[Storyteller]
叙事者
The end of Lastworld is near and they feel
他们感觉到了终结之地
that peril and anguish are waiting for them
危险和痛苦夹道欢迎
Now that Dorus has the sword the wizard will succumb
Dorus手执长剑，巫师甘愿臣服
and then peace will shine again
和平之光再次闪耀
even brighter than before
比以往更加耀眼
Step by step they walk in line
一步一步向前走去
Alron's leading the way to the inaccessible gates of Noland
Alron指引着通向无境的路
[The Group]
Waving our banners with pride we go
我们前进，挥舞着骄傲的旗帜
from the mountain tops to the shores with our heads up high
从山顶到海边，我们始终高昂头颅
to the moon so bright
月光皎洁
we deliver our song tonight
我们相互传唱着勇气之歌
今日的第二首
4.Broken Illusion
破碎之幻
[Alron]
We're before the cavern's gates
我们站在洞穴的门口
at the entrance of this dark place of loneliness
通往孤独的黑暗之处
it was dug into the rock by an ancient tribe，to imprison their outlaws
这是古代部落挖掘石块的产物，用来关押他们中的亡命之徒
On the left side of the cave
洞穴的左侧
there's empty spot where the black dragon used to be
这空旷之所是黑龙的旧居
but on the other side even the white dragon is missing
另外一边，曾经居住的白龙下落不明
We must walk into the cave
我们除了进入洞穴别无选择
Walking down into the heart of the mountain
向着山脉的心脏
The cobwebs will hide the way
蜘蛛网遮蔽着道路
pay attention cause it's easy to get lost
小心谨慎勿迷失方向
We're inside a labyrinth
我们身处迷宫之中
made of long tunnels that'll take you nowhere
任何一条小径会将你引向别处
bones here and there on the ground
遍地尸骨
oh yes,this one's a risky mission
这无疑是危险的任务
[Shena]
Down there my ring says follow my lead
我的指环告诉我顺从我的领队
the thing we're looking for is down there
我们所找寻的东西就在前方
soon we will solve the mystery of the sword here
不久我们就将破解长剑之谜
we are this is the place
我们将带来和平
[The Kings]王者
The boy told the truth
那个男孩讲述的皆为事实
the chest's not in its place
洞穴腹地不在这里
【chest本来是胸口的意思，从上面的翻译我们知道The Group身在洞穴，就把chest引申一下，洞穴的胸口，就是洞穴的关键之处，我把它翻译为腹地】
he was right the chest is no longer here
他是对的，洞穴腹地已经不再这里
our fear has become reality
我们恐惧渐生
now our duty is harder than ever
我们的任务更加艰难
The boy told the truth
那个男孩讲述的皆为事实
the chest's not in its place
洞穴腹地不在这里
he was right the chest is no longer here
他是对的，洞穴腹地不在这里
our fear has become reality
我们恐惧渐生
now our duty is harder than ever
我们的任务更加艰难
The boy told the truth
那个男孩讲述的皆为事实
the chest's not in its place
洞穴腹地不在这里
he was right the chest is no longer here
他是对的，洞穴腹地不在这里
our fear has become reality
我们恐惧渐生
now our duty is harder than ever
我们的任务更加艰难
[Rahed]
Let's go my friends we gotta go there
走吧我的伙伴们！让我们勇往直前
we must reach the dark lord
我们必须到达黑暗之主身边
before it's too late
现在还不算太晚
we will go together
让我们团结起来
to the perpetrator's den and save the day!
去到罪者的藏匿之地，解放当下
4.Broken Illusion
破碎之幻
[Alron]
We're before the cavern's gates
我们站在洞穴的门口
at the entrance of this dark place of loneliness
通往孤独的黑暗之处
it was dug into the rock by an ancient tribe，to imprison their outlaws
这是古代部落挖掘石块的产物，用来关押他们中的亡命之徒
On the left side of the cave
洞穴的左侧
there's empty spot where the black dragon used to be
这空旷之所是黑龙的旧居
but on the other side even the white dragon is missing
另外一边，曾经居住的白龙下落不明
We must walk into the cave
我们除了进入洞穴别无选择
Walking down into the heart of the mountain
向着山脉的心脏
The cobwebs will hide the way
蜘蛛网遮蔽着道路
pay attention cause it's easy to get lost
小心谨慎勿迷失方向
We're inside a labyrinth
我们身处迷宫之中
made of long tunnels that'll take you nowhere
任何一条小径会将你引向别处
bones here and there on the ground
遍地尸骨
oh yes,this one's a risky mission
这无疑是危险的任务
[Shena]
Down there my ring says follow my lead
我的指环告诉我顺从我的领队
the thing we're looking for is down there
我们所找寻的东西就在前方
soon we will solve the mystery of the sword here
不久我们就将破解长剑之谜
we are this is the place
我们将带来和平
[The Kings]王者
The boy told the truth
那个男孩讲述的皆为事实
the chest's not in its place
洞穴腹地不在这里
【chest本来是胸口的意思，从上面的翻译我们知道The Group身在洞穴，就把chest引申一下，洞穴的胸口，就是洞穴的关键之处，我把它翻译为腹地】
he was right the chest is no longer here
他是对的，洞穴腹地已经不再这里
our fear has become reality
我们恐惧渐生
now our duty is harder than ever
我们的任务更加艰难
The boy told the truth
那个男孩讲述的皆为事实
the chest's not in its place
洞穴腹地不在这里
he was right the chest is no longer here
他是对的，洞穴腹地不在这里
our fear has become reality
我们恐惧渐生
now our duty is harder than ever
我们的任务更加艰难
The boy told the truth
那个男孩讲述的皆为事实
the chest's not in its place
洞穴腹地不在这里
he was right the chest is no longer here
他是对的，洞穴腹地不在这里
our fear has become reality
我们恐惧渐生
now our duty is harder than ever
我们的任务更加艰难
[Rahed]
Let's go my friends we gotta go there
走吧我的伙伴们！让我们勇往直前
we must reach the dark lord
我们必须到达黑暗之主身边
before it's too late
现在还不算太晚
we will go together
让我们团结起来
to the perpetrator's den and save the day!
去到罪者的藏匿之地，解放当下
这几天翻译了四首，想大概说一下关于翻译的感想。
首先关于歌词里几个人物Dartol、Alron、Rehad、Shena、Sendor还有其他的，我暂时按着意大利文的读音翻译成达尔托、艾尔路恩、莱哈德、塞纳、赛多尔。这几个人物先开始以为是没有意义的，后来发现这几个人贯穿整个歌词脉络，Ancient Bards的歌词就像演出的剧本，人物性格通过翻译都能了解，比如联盟之王这张中有一首Dartol the dragonhunt，我们能知道，达尔托是一位屠龙的勇士，还有刚刚翻译这首破碎之幻中，Shena听到他的指环给他的指示，还有没翻译到Through My Veins中Shena有这样一句no holds barred here I nearly lost my ring，我们能推测Shena大概是一位通过指环占卜的预言家。
除了人物，还有歌词之间的照应，Soulless Child中最后一首Hope Dies Last中的of stealing that cursed crystal sword，有没有想到他们那张Trailer of the Black Crystal Sword Saga呢？
现在我也只看了Soulless Child无魂之子这一张的歌词，这几个人物形象还不太清楚，待到把歌词都弄懂了会单独分析一下这几个人物和几张专辑所讲述的都是一些什么故事w
从故事性来说Ancient Bards的歌词真的很有研究价值wwwww
明天就会翻译很喜欢的all that is true了w
首先关于歌词里几个人物Dartol、Alron、Rehad、Shena、Sendor还有其他的，我暂时按着意大利文的读音翻译成达尔托、艾尔路恩、莱哈德、塞纳、赛多尔。这几个人物先开始以为是没有意义的，后来发现这几个人贯穿整个歌词脉络，Ancient Bards的歌词就像演出的剧本，人物性格通过翻译都能了解，比如联盟之王这张中有一首Dartol the dragonhunt，我们能知道，达尔托是一位屠龙的勇士，还有刚刚翻译这首破碎之幻中，Shena听到他的指环给他的指示，还有没翻译到Through My Veins中Shena有这样一句no holds barred here I nearly lost my ring，我们能推测Shena大概是一位通过指环占卜的预言家。
除了人物，还有歌词之间的照应，Soulless Child中最后一首Hope Dies Last中的of stealing that cursed crystal sword，有没有想到他们那张Trailer of the Black Crystal Sword Saga呢？
现在我也只看了Soulless Child无魂之子这一张的歌词，这几个人物形象还不太清楚，待到把歌词都弄懂了会单独分析一下这几个人物和几张专辑所讲述的都是一些什么故事w
从故事性来说Ancient Bards的歌词真的很有研究价值wwwww
明天就会翻译很喜欢的all that is true了w
