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During the writing class, I’ve learned some important knowledge to improve my writing skill. First, writing is an important skill for all students, and not only on writing class, it’s when you looking for job.Especially, when you write the resume for interview, which would to know what is your intention on your jobs, and some thought about your jobs. That’s skill all comes from the writing. Second, writing structure is an important when you write an essay. If you don’t have somebasic structure show on your paper, people might not be able to understand. Third, it’s my first time to realize the important of writing, after Iame to college; Especially, I know how to use independent and dependent clause some basic grammar like that. However, I feel writing class helps me to get good writing on cover letter; Essay; e-mail etc.
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1楼2012-11-22 01:41回复

During the writing class, I’ve learned some important knowledge to improve my writing skills, which is essential due to the reasons below: First, writing, for all the students, is helpful not only in writing class, but also for looking for jobs, especially for writing the resume which shows your interests and understandings of the job. Second, writing structure is important when you write an essay since people may misunderstand your opinion without a clear structure.
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Third, it’s my first time to realize the importance of writing after being a college student; Especially, I know how to use independent and dependent clause some basic grammar like that（这句话不知道嘛意思，未做改变）. However (转折？）, I feel writing class helps me to to write cover letters， essays, and e-mails well.

2楼2012-11-22 02:37

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