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whenever i am asked what i 'd like to do in my spare time ,i'll not hesitate a moment to say that i love traveling
last year, l had a short visit to Beijing with my family. it was my first time to get there,so i was curious about this city and visited the palaces of historical interest(要不要大写).when the Great wall appeared in front of us,we couldn't help thinking how wonderful it is!it is said you can see it from the space.although this is false(这里我想说明这句话是错误的,能否用false),i’m (这里需要用过去式吗)still proud of it
i enioy(这里需要用过去式吗 ) every minutes of this trip.it was really an unforgettable experience


1楼2012-11-08 14:40回复
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    来自Android客户端2楼2012-11-08 14:40
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      10分钟后还没人帮忙我就帮你看下,现在在写自己作业,楼主不要着急


      IP属地:上海来自iPhone客户端5楼2012-11-08 14:46
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        it is too nan,i can not help u,i can ask qi ta people,need no need ?


        IP属地:上海6楼2012-11-08 14:52
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          为什么我回复了刷新不出来?白打半天了。。


          IP属地:上海10楼2012-11-08 15:16
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            whenever i am asked what i 'd like to do in my spare time ,i'll not hesitate a moment to say that i love traveling
            直接用when, When somebody asks me what I'd like to do in my spare time, I reply without hesitate that I love travel. (travel 名词有旅游的意思)
            我如果写是这样的: When somebody asks me about my preferences spending on my spare time, I replay immediately that I love travel.
            


            IP属地:上海11楼2012-11-08 15:20
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              last year, l had a short visit to Beijing with my family. it was my first time to get there,so i was curious about this city and visited the palaces of historical interest(要不要大写).
              Last year, my family and I took a trip to Beijing. Since I had never been there, I was curious about this city a lot. During the trip, I visited the Imperial Palace, and went to the Great Wall.
              


              IP属地:上海12楼2012-11-08 15:23
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                i enioy(这里需要用过去式吗 ) every minutes of this trip.it was really an unforgettable experience
                想了下 觉得应该加个过去式 I enjoyed every minutes of this trip. It was really an unforgettable experience.


                IP属地:上海15楼2012-11-08 15:37
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                  差不多就行了,出国也不用每个语法都对。楼主有问题留言吧,我不是国内时间,休息了。


                  IP属地:上海16楼2012-11-08 15:38
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