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我写的一篇Funny Story,求鉴定是否funny!!!!d大神求助!!

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Gibbs, Tyler and Neal are good friends. They work for the same company. Gibbs and Tyler love coffee so much. But Boss told Neal to find some places to cut costs around here. So Neal took their coffee maker. Gibbs knows this thing and tells to Neal angrily “Free coffee is the only reason people have jobs! Now I have to go to Starbucks like some animal. An animal, Neal! ” Neal has nothing to say. Next day, Gibbs finds a company just got a new coffee maker. And this coffee maker is so amazing. So Gibbs goes into this company and pretends as this company’s worker. Nora is beside the coffee maker. Gibbs says hello to her and makes a cup of coffee to drink. They talk to each other. And they become friends. But Gibbs lies to Nora his name is Gib. One day, Nora tells to Gibbs “Oh, this guy I’m seeing says his job keeps him really busy. And he hasn’t called me in a week” Gibbs says “This guy doesn’t deserve you. If he wanted to see you, he’d make time. Matter of fact, if that dude was here right now, I’d throw this coffee right in his face. And I’d get myself another coffee.” Next day, Gibbs told to Tyler that he has got a new source for coffee. And then, he takes Tyler there. As they go in there, Nora is just coming out the front door when she sees Gibbs. “Hey, Gibb” “ Hey, Nora. this is……” “Tyler?” Nora says. “Dora ,right?” Tyler says. “It’s Nora. He just said my name.” Nora says angrily. “Oh……Oh, he’s the one you’ve been……” Gibbs realized. “shame on you, stranger! Shame on you!” then Gibbs would throw this coffee right in his face. “That’s hot, Gibbs! You’re selling me out for free coffee?” Tyler told to Gibbs angrily. “You are a big liar!” Nora realized. “Yeah……I know. I got this.” then Gibbs would throw this coffee right in himself.


1楼2012-08-13 13:40回复
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    2楼2012-08-13 13:43
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      3楼2012-08-13 13:43
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        4楼2012-08-13 13:44
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          很抱歉,过不了我这一关......下一位......


          IP属地:马来西亚5楼2012-08-13 13:52
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            6楼2012-08-13 15:57
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              7楼2012-08-14 15:34
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                我也觉得不是很好笑。。。可能是笑点高吧。。。


                来自手机贴吧8楼2012-08-14 16:22
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                  Sorry , ... kind of dull


                  来自Android客户端9楼2012-08-14 16:41
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                    10楼2012-08-14 16:49
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                      尼玛 没看懂。。


                      来自手机贴吧11楼2012-08-14 16:49
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                        我也没看懂!resort to interpretation


                        IP属地:重庆来自iPhone客户端12楼2012-08-14 16:59
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