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【求助】帮忙翻译,我自己翻译不标准 lately

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Macy Gray - Lately
That day when I made you cry,
那天我让你流泪
didn't think you'd say goodbye
没想到你会说分手
but I hurt you deep inside and I'm sorry love
对不起我亲爱的,我知道我伤害了你
Hope you can understand
希望你能明白
when I went to the other man
我失去了深爱我的男人
See baby, had to work my plan
可是你看到的,我的工作很忙
but you've had enough Yeah, shake me love
但你是我的动力,yeah ,你强烈的爱
You wake me love
能够唤醒我的动力
I'm dreamin' of ya
我又梦到了你
(I know that we're)
我知道我们
We're broken up but I'm sure it was love,
我知道我们现在已经不可能像以前一样爱着
my love我的爱
Lately I've been... Lately I've been coming up just like a palm tree
最近,我最近被很多人包围着,我觉得站在中间像一棵树
People surrounding me
人们都很崇拜我
Yeah, I'm popular
是,我很受欢迎
They say I'm pretty
他们说我很漂亮
You should come back to me (Back to me)
你也应该向他们一样来到我身边(围绕我)
Lately, lately Yeah, baby I was a crab
但是,不久前,我感觉我很迷茫
Didn't realise what I had
我不知道这些只否是过眼云烟
Took the good and made it bad
这样我的心情很低落
and I'm sorry love
对不起,亲爱的
But I landed on my feet, now
但是我现在感觉很不安
Lookie here and you will see, now
这些你现在会看到么
I think you'll like me
我想你看到会喜欢吧
Check me out Yeah, shake me love
看看我,我要动摇了
Don't wake me love
不要动摇我的爱
I'm dreamin' of ya
在我的梦里也不能
(I know that we're) We're broken up
我知道我们,已经成为过去
but I'm sure it was love, my love
但是我清楚那爱的感觉,我的爱
Lately I've been... Lately I've been coming up just like a palm tree
People surrounding me
Yeah, I'm popular
They say I'm pretty (I'm pretty baby)
You should come back to me (Yeah, yeah)
Lately, lately You have what I need and I know how it seems
最近,最近,我怎么才能让你知道我这样需要你
but it's not that way (Not that way)
告诉你不是这样,不是这样
I was chasing my dreams
我曾一心追逐我的梦想
(I was chasing my dreams)
If you only knew (If you only knew)
如果你能了解,
how I felt about you, you'd be running back
我这样思念你,你一定会回来(Running back),
back on my street Lately (Lately)
回来我们经常走的街道,
I've been coming up (Coming up)
我已经来了,
just like a palm tree (Palm)
我像棵树一样
People surrounding me
被人们包围着
Yeah, I'm popular
是的,我很受欢迎
They say I'm pretty
他们说我很漂亮
You should come back to me (Yeah)
你应该回到我身边
Lately, lately Lately
I've been coming up just like a palm tree
People surrounding me
(Yeah, all now get that I'm popular)
Yeah, I'm popular
They say I'm pretty (Yeah, that I'm pretty baby)
You should come back to me
Lately, lately
Lately I've been coming up
(Come to me) just like a palm tree
People surrounding me
Yeah, I'm popular
They say I'm pretty
You should come back to me (Alright)
Lately, lately


1楼2012-01-31 00:54回复
    初看了前面十几行,翻译得大致挺不错的,只是有几个小纰漏,想跟楼主探讨一下~
    when I went to the other man
    我失去了深爱我的男人
    不是说她找过第二个男人了吗?应该翻成“当我投入他人怀抱”比较恰当吧。
    But I landed on my feet, now
    但是我现在感觉很不安
    landed on my feet 字面上是“化险为夷”,恰恰是说她感觉踏实了,不应该翻译成“不安”吧
    We're broken up but I'm sure it was love,
    我知道我们现在已经不可能像以前一样爱着
    这句意思有出入,应该是“我们虽已分开但我相信过去的是真爱”
    


    2楼2012-01-31 16:07
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      palm tree棕榈树


      3楼2012-01-31 16:12
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        为什么我觉得好多都怪怪的呢。。。
        可能我翻的比较直白吧。。。。。。。。


        4楼2012-01-31 16:18
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          谢谢大家了,加油,反正我也是看感觉和当时听歌的心情翻译的,加了好多自己的意思进入,有什么觉的不对的大家要告诉我哦!尽快改正才好


          来自手机贴吧5楼2012-01-31 17:01
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